What I Wrote In 2008  

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Time to disclose what I have been writing in 2008 ! I realize I didn't talk much about my writings. 

Writings in English
  • Random Innocent People (Novel) : Finished the first draft for NaNo 2007. I wanted to rewrite it instead of doing NaNo 2008. Did a very detailed outline. But I didn't participate into the social side of NaNoWriMo 2008 (word wars, forums, daily reports of what I wrote) and I guess that's the reason why I failed. The rewrite amounts approx. 20K words. 
  • MIAMI (short story) : In summer 2008 I wanted to write something about... sun, beaches, nightlife... But seen by someone poor and jobless.
  • Cosmic Divide (short story) : I started this project in December 2008. Wanted to do a short story taking place in a dream world, with "spirit" characters and improbable powers. Just put a few hundred words on it.
Writings in French 
As I am French, I'm writing more pieces in French than in English. Without going into details, here what I wrote : 
  • I created a PDF magazine for my IRC friends. It's called RBD Pride. It's full of funny IRC quotes, articles about video games or hand made crosswords. Take a look at the website : http://rbdmag.hed854.net.
  • Wrote one non-fiction (about early 90's computer science, BBS etc). Weighs 20 pages and I'm rather proud of it.
  • Tons of journaling (my waking life, my dreams, etc. !)
  • Various outlines for novels or short stories.
Next time I'll tell you about my writing resolutions :D

Rewriting. And restarting. And failing.  

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Finishing is soooo much harder than starting.

NaNoWriMo is over since a couple of weeks. As you know, I didn't participate in the event. I had decided to edit my '07 NaNoWriMo and take it to a "finished" state. But I haven't gotten anywhere near this goal.

The question I ask myself if "why ?". During this month, I wrote everyday : articles, short fiction, journalling. But I only modified 17K words in my novel. I had a 4K words outline, the novel wiki full of documentation, and plenty of time to write. But the rewrite didn't happen... I decided to restart...


Restarting is even harder, because you want to finish but you don't know where is the original impulse that made you start.


But I failed at restarting. When I first wrote my Nano back in November 2007 I wasn't in the same state of mind that in November 2008. I could try to replicate the same form and writing style but it seemed... bad. Uninspired.

So what will I do now ? I still want to finish my previous NaNo (06 and 07) before tackling new challenges. Only time will tell how I'll manage to do it.


No-distraction writing : 5 fullscreen lightweight text editors  

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The deadline for your novel, your short story or your article is coming soon. You decide to cut all distractions. Shut the door, put headphones on... But what about your writing software ? Here's a selection of fullscreen text editors.


For PC Users

This is a freeware clone of WriteRoom (see below) made in .Net. The software is complete with wordcount, statistic functions and colors customization (you can even make DarkRoom transparent !). DarkRoom is fullscreen by default but you can switch it off if you want.

Q10 is an advanced fullscreen text editor. It sports the same basic functions as WriteRoom, but there's more. The file statistics are displayed on a status bar at the bottom of the screen. It has special functions for word wars and writing goals (it can be a word count target or a time limit). Plus it has autosave.



For Mac OS users

The editor which started it all. Minimalistic, fullscreen environment. The downside is that Write Room isn't a freeware anymore (it costs $24).



Cross Platform software

True, Google Docs isn't a text editor but rather a word processor. Anyway, it has a fullscreen option (F11), making it useful when you can't install or execute software on your machine. It's also the only application in this panel which supports text revisions (light version control).

A freeware crossplatform clone of WriteRoom. As its name says, it's in Java. It has all the basics functions (colors customization, statistics, autosave, text search).

That's all ! I hope it will help you to go through the last words of your writing piece.

Test your scenes (in 6 steps)  

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In software development, we are fond of unit testing :

In computer programming, unit testing is a method of testing that verifies the individual units of source code are working properly.

What about applying this philosophy to your novel ? Here's a collection of rules I put together to test my scenes in my novel.

Here's how you use the test :
Each positive answer gives your scene 1 point. If your scene rates under 2, you can safely cut it from your work. If it rates between 3 and 4, try to rewrite it. Finally, the highest rated scenes must be kept at all costs !

  1. At the end of the scene, something has changed in the story
  2. There's an obstacle or a conflict, even a minor one
  3. The place and time stays the same
  4. The characters act, speak and look in character
  5. Every character is "alive" in the scene
  6. You can read your scene without skipping to the end

Now some explaining about the items :

1 - At the end of the scene, something has changed in the story
The main purpose of a scene is to move the story forward. It doesn't mean something has to explode or someone has to die ! The changes can be small : a decision in your character's head, the rain beginning to fall... Or better : your character doesn't see the change yet, but the reader does !

2 - There's an obstacle or a conflict, even a minor one
Characters are like us. They like sleeping, sitting in comfy sofas, and talking to people who always agree with them. But if you want a compelling story, you have to create a conflict or two to throw them ouf of that "comfort zone". There are many types of conflicts : internal or external. Life-threatening or mundane. Expected or inexpected. You choose !

3 - The time and place stays the same
Think about scenes in plays. When the curtain goes down, the playwright brings new costumes, new props and new lighting to the scene. Scenes in novels are the same : you must end your scene when you travel places. If you don't, you'll find yourself with scens which are too long or confusing.

4 - The characters act, speak and look in character
In some scenes, you manage to make something happen. You manage to push your character out of his/her comfort zone. But when you read the scene, you realize that you managed all that at the cost of your character's personnality. You made him/her do something he/she wouldn't do normally ! Old characters suddenly talking like rappers "because they're angry"... Your heroine suddenly "forgetting" important details because your plot needed it. Keep in mind that characters are more important than "the big plot" in novels.

5 - Every character is "alive" in the scene
Sometimes you become a fan of your main hero (or your main villain !) and you tend to forget everyone else. If you see that your secondary characters sound like talking heads or act like puppets... you have a problem !

6 - You can read your scene without skipping to the end
If you write for NaNoWriMo, you've certainly written "filler" scenes to reach your daily wordcount. Your characters debate about the weather or find a hidden portion of cheese in their kitchen. When thinking about these scenes, you certainly remember the fun you had writing it. But the problem is : you don't want to read them again because they are so out of context.


I hope this article has helped you to review your scenes and make them better ! If you want to improve, don't hesitate to study great novels. See what works depending on the genre. And replicate what you've learnt into your own novel !

A bunch of excuses !  

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To be honest I didn't start to write... yet. I've taken a day off this Friday and I'll start writing here. The first words are growing in my head. It will be great ;)

These last weeks, my wrists have been under high stress. As you know my day job is computer programmer - I write code all day. In addition to that, I've been taking part into a video game creation competition from October 18th to this Monday. This means I wasn't exactly in the right mood to write anything.

To finish this article, I did a little bit of tidying on the blog. You can now browse the posts about my previous NaNoWriMo's ! These are not "writing tips" articles but rather my personal logs about my novel progress. Enjoy !

NaNoWriMo rebel !  

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funny pictures

NaNoWriMo has started (in France). I'm hanging on the french IRC #nanowrimo channel. I'm watching Lost. You understood correcty : I didn't write a word. Yet.

In 2006 and 2007, I wrote 2000 and 4000 words respectively. What has changed ? This year, I'm a NaNoWriMo rebel : I'm rewriting Random Innocent People, my '07 novel.

My tools : my '07 manuscript (51K words), my brand new plan (4K words), and two editing attempts I did in early 2008.

I'll keep you up to date !

Keep your nerve for NaNoWriMo : how to avoid wrist pain !  

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November is the month of NaNoWriMo. But for our wrists and fingers, it's more like National RSI Month. You will be typing at home, in the train, while eating your Thanksgiving dinner... You see my point.

How do you prevent your hands from melting ? Here are a few tips.

Get Workrave


Workrave is a freeware timer which will prompt you to take breaks and stretch your body from time to time. Your mouse and keyboard will be blocked so you WILL have to move away.

Protect your hands with wrist braces




It will keep your wrists warm and ease the pressure. Ergonomic wrist braces are the best but give you . If you're broke, tennis wrist bands are cheaper but less effective, of course.

Learn stretching exercises


Workrave gives you a few basic stretching exercises to do but here's a few more for you to learn.



Keep your posture okay
  • Don't write in the bed ! Writing in the bed encourages weird typing positions. Get a desk and a chair if you want to write without hurting yourself.
  • Don't sleep with your hands under your pillow, under your head or under your body. And for NaNo's sake, please stop cuddling teddy bears all night long. It's bad for your hands.

If everything fails : stop writing !
Kidding ! I know nothing will stop you from writing. But you don't have to type, really. Three solutions :
  • Use voice recognition software like Dragon Naturally Speaking.
  • Record your novel and use online transcription services to type it.
  • Write your novel longhand and outsource the typing (hire a student, contact your old friend secretary, outsource to India...)
I hope this article will help you to get through NaNoWriMo without any pain. And don't forget : if the symptoms become well, repetitive - don't forget to get medical assistance !

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